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Tuesday, 9 January 2007
Gledwood's Poetry Corner
Mood:  flirty
Now Playing: the Bard
Topic: Poetry

ONE OF THE WONDERS of a good clear-out is the stuff you find you never knew you had.  The following poetry I salvaged from my old Green poem collection... I don't know what to say about them, except these are three of the best ones (so just imagine what the worst are like!!) I've not written any poetry at all (to the best of my memory) in the last ten years. Oh yeah. Except that wonderful mousey song you'll find posted some time in December. Because I remember t'was the season for "Little Donkey"-type carols anyhow. Oh, and BTW; concerning these three:— that last one, the wanderer. How grim, eh!?! Hmm...

If anyone has a comment/comments I'd be interested to hear what people think of these. They don't seem to be quite as crappy as I remembered.

PS If you want a real laugh, go for a poke through the works of William Topaz McGonnagal. The Tay Bridge Disaster is one of his best known works. Click here for an entertaining read: http://www.taynet.co.uk/users/mcgon/disaster.htm. The closing couplet is fantastic. My American friends might prefer to start with Jottings of New York: http://www.taynet.co.uk/users/mcgon/jottings.htm — a "Topaz" command performance.  Not, to my mind, as boringly Victorian as his Tay Bridge ejaculation, in it he murders one's sense of the sublime more practisedly & is altogether entertaininger. See what you think.

Anyhow, folks; here's me:—

Embankment by Night

A thousand lights are hanging in the Thames,

garlands strewn by swirl and tide

into a protoplasm of stars

echoing reticence of frosty night;

glitter so gladly and so bright.

I wish to touch their candied radience,

they lift me like a trip,

smiling, splashed, fantasticated suns

immune to miseries of wind and cold,

shards of celebration drawn from sleep,

the cosmos of a reverie reflected

in the blood of a town too jaded to dream.

                                          11 January 1997

 

Words

What are words for?

Words make use of breathing:

consciousness of living:

they tell us we can hear.

Lips and faces.

What are faces for?

If not for telling who we are.

And how we feel

and how we are.

Words can lie; but eyes find flickered feeling.

Without eyes, faces have no meaning.

Then only words could tell the truth

or lie.

Do you see?

                                          7 January 1997 

The Wanderer

The evening wanderer moves

amongst the shadows of the night:

the world of people is passed

and dusk takes its own.

Day by daylight he moves,

a shadow among people;

a ruined church

in a thicket of lost graves.

Night by light the days

pass like speeding cars;

merge, drop by drop

in some forgotten pool...

Grey memories crowd

in sleepy groves, shades

of shadow-cities gather

gloating in the gloom, attentive.

The cold fingers of past

caress his throat,

tightening like strange dreams;

a whispering: "Remember me."

And when the wanderer rests,

his bed will be his grave.

                                          1991/1992

Copyright © 2007 by Gledwood all rights reserved & all...


Posted by gledwood at 8:56 PM GMT
Updated: Tuesday, 9 January 2007 10:33 PM GMT

Tuesday, 9 January 2007 - 11:57 PM GMT

Name: "Ruth"
Home Page: http://ruthjen.blogspot.com/

Wow Gledwood, these are fantastic. I particularly like The Wanderer. Why don't you start another blog; just your poetry. You really need to start writing again....you have a gift and now have another 10 years experience to draw on.

Yours in awe

Rx

Wednesday, 10 January 2007 - 12:47 AM GMT

Name: gledwood
Home Page: http://gledwood.tripod.com

Do you really think so? That's great. I was thinking of posting them on their very own blog. Poems are so difficult to get "properly" published and it would be a shame to let them rot away on my shelf without them ever getting the light of day....

As I sort of hinted... well obviously when you write something you usually think it's at least QUITE good bc you know precisely what effect you're aiming at and what you mean... then you put them away and reread them with a far more critical eye... I'd got used to the idea they weren't all that good at all (maybe the odd good line but, well...) Then I had a look through last night and was quite shocked by some of them. It was almost like reading work by somebody else!!

Wednesday, 10 January 2007 - 12:51 AM GMT

Name: "Gledwood"
Home Page: http://gledwood.tripod.com

The line I'm most unsure about in the Wanderer goes "Night by light". Originally it said "Night by daylight" but that sounded a little pretentious to me... I shall have to rethink that line bc I only changed it as I was entering it in the computer.

Saturday, 13 January 2007 - 6:50 PM GMT

Name: "Elsie"
Home Page: http://ezi-gifts-galore.blogspot.com

Hi

This wanderer of yours is so good!!!!- You should seriously consider a poetry blog.

 

Take care

 

Lc 

 

 

 

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